Tuesday, 31 May 2016

Report writing model

Sample Report

Write a report suggesting improvements to classes at Today School, based on student surveys.

In your report you should:

·         Students’ suggested improvements in classroom activities
·         Students’ suggest improvements in activities outside the classroom
·         Say whether you would recommend any of the suggestions made by students

a)    Underline / highlight any words or phrases that you think are particularly appropriate for a report.
b)    Can you find any examples of the passive voice being used?

Introduction
The aim of this report is to compare different ideas to make classes in Today School more enjoyable for students while learning at the same time. A large number of students were interviewed to find out differing opinions. 

Classroom Activities
Some of the students suggested using more videos and songs during the classes and some even mentioned that parties with alcohol would be a good idea. A few of them gave reasons why they preferred these activities:
§  Pop music and films are  interesting and topical
§  Alcohol makes people relax and talk more.

Outside  Class
The majority of students mentioned that homework should be reduced drastically, whereas others expressed a preference for doing excursions in English, giving the following reasons:
§  Too much homework makes students stressed.
§  Excursions are a fun way of putting into practice what is learnt.

Recommendations
Some of the ideas have benefits, however, suggestions to allow alcohol and reduce homework should be immediately discarded. On the other hand, it is felt the majority of students would take advantage of more pop videos and excursions and so these suggestions are recommendable.


Essay writing tips

Essay Writing: Top Tips
You should:
1.       Underline important words in the question and its instructions.
2.       Use different kinds of support (reasons, examples, personal experience, other people’s experiences, things read or heard, logical arguments, generalisations, facts, etc) for each of their arguments
3.       Make sure that the things that they add to each opinion do actually support your arguments
4.       Avoid repeating words (including in the final summary/ conclusion)
5.       Make sure that the essay is neat enough to be understood without needing to be read again
6.       Start writing as soon as you can think of one reasonably suitable third subtopic (rather than wasting time brainstorming better options)
7.       Be ambitious with the language that you use, showing the examiner that you have a high language level and making up for any weaknesses in other areas such as accuracy
8.       Also add more ambitious language at the editing stage
9.       Choose to express and support whatever opinion seems easier to write about, rather than automatically deciding to write your real opinion
10.   Use as high a level of formality as you can, including things like avoiding contractions (“I am” rather than “I’m” etc), because more formal language will also be higher level language/ more ambitious language
11.   Use longer versions of basic phrases, e.g. using “I strongly believe” rather than “I believe”
12.   Give some background to the question by describing how it is important, interesting and/ or topical in the introduction (making sure that what you say is believable, not just a recycled phrase from a model answer)
You can:
1.       Use rhetorical questions
2.       Make up your own personal experiences etc to support your arguments (as long as they are believable)
3.       Write the opposite of your real opinion (if that is easier to support)
4.       Do Writing Part Two first if they have a mental block with the Writing Part One essay, coming back to the first task later
5.       Use some slightly more informal but high level language such as phrasal verbs
6.       Use Latin abbreviations such as “e.g.” and “etc”
7.       Cross things off and use little arrows to insert missing words (rather than overusing their eraser, if you have an erasable pen)
8.       Add whole missing sentences to the middle of the text, by putting the sentence in a box at the top or bottom of the page and drawing a long arrow to show where it should go
You shouldn’t:
1.       Try to look at both sides of each of the three subtopics
2.       Waste time brainstorming lots of ideas for the best third sub-topic
3.       Make up things to support your arguments that are outside your own experience such as imaginary statistics, quotations or page numbers of books
4.       Start paragraphs with multipurpose phrases like “Secondly” and “On the other hand” (rather than “The second argument for… is…” and “Turning to the arguments against…”)
5.       Leave editing Part One until you have written Part Two too (as you will almost certainly run out of time first)
6.       Assume knowledge that the examiner might not have (such as detailed knowledge of your hometown)
7.       Waste time counting every word
8.       Include other arguments in their summary/ conclusion which you didn’t mention in the body of their essay
9.       Stick to basic language in an attempt to make sure that you don’t make mistakes (ambitious language being at least as important)
10.   Waste time editing the essay down if you go over 190 words
11.   Use exactly the same words in your summary/ conclusion as in the body of the essay
12.   Use paragraph headings
You don’t need to:
1.       Bother thinking of a title
2.       Deal with the subtopics in the same order they are given in the quetion sheet
3.       Worry too much about British and American English

4.       Worry about how clever your ideas are

Monday, 16 May 2016

New vocab from last week

To sell out of / be sold out of
To head-butt = to hit someone with your head
Hair-raising = scary
To take something/somebody for granted = to not appreciate something/somebody fully
To mean to do something = To do something intentionally
All smoke and mirrors = all pretend/fake
To be taken aback = to be surprised
Grin = smile
To hold your own = to be competent at something
To itch to do something = to be really keen/eager
To itch = to scratch yourself
To get your head round something = to figure something out
Sore (ad) = something hurts

To stand out = to be different from others

To stuff = to fill
To say for certain
To turn up = to appear by surprise
To remain popular = to continue to be popular
To take a long time
Rather than = instead of
To set off/out/sail(only with a boat) = To leave (on a journey)
To succeed IN doing something
To come across = to find
To be ON sale
To prove to be
To not see the point OF doing something = To believe something is pointless

Monday, 2 May 2016

Essay writing task and model answer

In your English class, you have recently had a discussion about science and young people. Now your English teacher has asked you to write an essay.
Write an essay using all the notes and give reasons for your point of view.
Science is very important in the 21st century. How do you think it could be made more appealing to young people?
Notes
Write about: 
1. television programmes
2. interactive museums
3. ________ (your own idea)
Write your essay in 140-190 words in an appropriate style.

Essay 2 - Model answer

Although young people love gadgets and technology, some see science as uninteresting and 'uncool'. Over time, the number of young people, particularly girls, pursuing science and technology studies and careers has dropped.
One way in which science could be made more attractive would be to have lively television programmes presented by celebrities, with subjects which were relevant to the experience of the young. We live in a celebrity culture and children identify with well-known young people.
Another idea would be to set up interactive science museums in every town, where parents could take their children. It is much better to teach children the principles of science through hands-on experiments than to lecture them in a classroom.
Of course, there would be more incentives if the average scientit were better paid and young people were made aware of the range of jobs available. A lot of people are put off a scientific career because they think it means working in a badly paid job in a boring laboratory.
Whichever way we choose, it is vital that more young people are attracted to science, since society's prosperity depends largely on continuous scientific progress.
(+/- 190 words)
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