Tuesday, 31 May 2016

Report writing model

Sample Report

Write a report suggesting improvements to classes at Today School, based on student surveys.

In your report you should:

·         Students’ suggested improvements in classroom activities
·         Students’ suggest improvements in activities outside the classroom
·         Say whether you would recommend any of the suggestions made by students

a)    Underline / highlight any words or phrases that you think are particularly appropriate for a report.
b)    Can you find any examples of the passive voice being used?

Introduction
The aim of this report is to compare different ideas to make classes in Today School more enjoyable for students while learning at the same time. A large number of students were interviewed to find out differing opinions. 

Classroom Activities
Some of the students suggested using more videos and songs during the classes and some even mentioned that parties with alcohol would be a good idea. A few of them gave reasons why they preferred these activities:
§  Pop music and films are  interesting and topical
§  Alcohol makes people relax and talk more.

Outside  Class
The majority of students mentioned that homework should be reduced drastically, whereas others expressed a preference for doing excursions in English, giving the following reasons:
§  Too much homework makes students stressed.
§  Excursions are a fun way of putting into practice what is learnt.

Recommendations
Some of the ideas have benefits, however, suggestions to allow alcohol and reduce homework should be immediately discarded. On the other hand, it is felt the majority of students would take advantage of more pop videos and excursions and so these suggestions are recommendable.


Essay writing tips

Essay Writing: Top Tips
You should:
1.       Underline important words in the question and its instructions.
2.       Use different kinds of support (reasons, examples, personal experience, other people’s experiences, things read or heard, logical arguments, generalisations, facts, etc) for each of their arguments
3.       Make sure that the things that they add to each opinion do actually support your arguments
4.       Avoid repeating words (including in the final summary/ conclusion)
5.       Make sure that the essay is neat enough to be understood without needing to be read again
6.       Start writing as soon as you can think of one reasonably suitable third subtopic (rather than wasting time brainstorming better options)
7.       Be ambitious with the language that you use, showing the examiner that you have a high language level and making up for any weaknesses in other areas such as accuracy
8.       Also add more ambitious language at the editing stage
9.       Choose to express and support whatever opinion seems easier to write about, rather than automatically deciding to write your real opinion
10.   Use as high a level of formality as you can, including things like avoiding contractions (“I am” rather than “I’m” etc), because more formal language will also be higher level language/ more ambitious language
11.   Use longer versions of basic phrases, e.g. using “I strongly believe” rather than “I believe”
12.   Give some background to the question by describing how it is important, interesting and/ or topical in the introduction (making sure that what you say is believable, not just a recycled phrase from a model answer)
You can:
1.       Use rhetorical questions
2.       Make up your own personal experiences etc to support your arguments (as long as they are believable)
3.       Write the opposite of your real opinion (if that is easier to support)
4.       Do Writing Part Two first if they have a mental block with the Writing Part One essay, coming back to the first task later
5.       Use some slightly more informal but high level language such as phrasal verbs
6.       Use Latin abbreviations such as “e.g.” and “etc”
7.       Cross things off and use little arrows to insert missing words (rather than overusing their eraser, if you have an erasable pen)
8.       Add whole missing sentences to the middle of the text, by putting the sentence in a box at the top or bottom of the page and drawing a long arrow to show where it should go
You shouldn’t:
1.       Try to look at both sides of each of the three subtopics
2.       Waste time brainstorming lots of ideas for the best third sub-topic
3.       Make up things to support your arguments that are outside your own experience such as imaginary statistics, quotations or page numbers of books
4.       Start paragraphs with multipurpose phrases like “Secondly” and “On the other hand” (rather than “The second argument for… is…” and “Turning to the arguments against…”)
5.       Leave editing Part One until you have written Part Two too (as you will almost certainly run out of time first)
6.       Assume knowledge that the examiner might not have (such as detailed knowledge of your hometown)
7.       Waste time counting every word
8.       Include other arguments in their summary/ conclusion which you didn’t mention in the body of their essay
9.       Stick to basic language in an attempt to make sure that you don’t make mistakes (ambitious language being at least as important)
10.   Waste time editing the essay down if you go over 190 words
11.   Use exactly the same words in your summary/ conclusion as in the body of the essay
12.   Use paragraph headings
You don’t need to:
1.       Bother thinking of a title
2.       Deal with the subtopics in the same order they are given in the quetion sheet
3.       Worry too much about British and American English

4.       Worry about how clever your ideas are

Monday, 16 May 2016

New vocab from last week

To sell out of / be sold out of
To head-butt = to hit someone with your head
Hair-raising = scary
To take something/somebody for granted = to not appreciate something/somebody fully
To mean to do something = To do something intentionally
All smoke and mirrors = all pretend/fake
To be taken aback = to be surprised
Grin = smile
To hold your own = to be competent at something
To itch to do something = to be really keen/eager
To itch = to scratch yourself
To get your head round something = to figure something out
Sore (ad) = something hurts

To stand out = to be different from others

To stuff = to fill
To say for certain
To turn up = to appear by surprise
To remain popular = to continue to be popular
To take a long time
Rather than = instead of
To set off/out/sail(only with a boat) = To leave (on a journey)
To succeed IN doing something
To come across = to find
To be ON sale
To prove to be
To not see the point OF doing something = To believe something is pointless

Monday, 2 May 2016

Essay writing task and model answer

In your English class, you have recently had a discussion about science and young people. Now your English teacher has asked you to write an essay.
Write an essay using all the notes and give reasons for your point of view.
Science is very important in the 21st century. How do you think it could be made more appealing to young people?
Notes
Write about: 
1. television programmes
2. interactive museums
3. ________ (your own idea)
Write your essay in 140-190 words in an appropriate style.

Essay 2 - Model answer

Although young people love gadgets and technology, some see science as uninteresting and 'uncool'. Over time, the number of young people, particularly girls, pursuing science and technology studies and careers has dropped.
One way in which science could be made more attractive would be to have lively television programmes presented by celebrities, with subjects which were relevant to the experience of the young. We live in a celebrity culture and children identify with well-known young people.
Another idea would be to set up interactive science museums in every town, where parents could take their children. It is much better to teach children the principles of science through hands-on experiments than to lecture them in a classroom.
Of course, there would be more incentives if the average scientit were better paid and young people were made aware of the range of jobs available. A lot of people are put off a scientific career because they think it means working in a badly paid job in a boring laboratory.
Whichever way we choose, it is vital that more young people are attracted to science, since society's prosperity depends largely on continuous scientific progress.
(+/- 190 words)
- See more at: http://www.rubenvalero.com/english/content/fce-essay#sthash.kWjxvxSy.dpuf

Monday, 25 April 2016

Article question to answer in class

Article- Model question 2

TASK
You see this announcement in an international magazine.
Articles wanted
Life on a desert island
Imagine you were on a desert island. What important object, person or place in your life would you miss most? What would be the reasons?
Write us an article answering these questions.
We will publish the best articles in the magazine.
Write your article in 140-190 words in an appropriate style.
- See more at: http://www.rubenvalero.com/english/content/fce-article#sthash.nIt3hzy1.dpuf

Model essay answer to question from last week

Anyone who commits a crime should be prosecuted. Some people believe, myself included, that serving a community is a more effective way to stop reoffending than financial penalty. So what are the benefits deriving from doing community service?
First and foremost, offenders are being requested to spend their precious time on voluntary work. Paying a fine is relatively unchallenging when compared to weeks or even months of labour a lawbreaker has to devote to local society free of charge.
Additionally, community service is sometimes the only way to gain the knowledge about hazards arising from felonies. For example, if a person has been caught speeding, an adequate service one should do is to become a lollipop man at a local school crossing.
Finally, spending time and helping out a local society may positively influence wrongdoers. They begin to contemplate on their behaviour and eventually come to conclusion that they are capable of making a positive difference in society.
In conclusion, creative way of punishment in a form of community service is without a doubt a more efficient way to halt reoffending. Not only the local society benefits from it but also the lawbreaker who learns the lesson.

How to write an article, exam question and model answer

Paper 2 Part 2 - Article

AN ARTICLE is usually written for an English-language magazine or newsletter, and the reader is assumed to have similar interests to the writer. The main purpose is to inform, interest and engage the reader, so there should be some opinion or comment.

Hints

  • Add a short title to catch the reader's attention. Make sure it is relevant. You can use the one in the question or invent one of your own.
  • Introduce the topic. Although you don't know the readers personally, you can address them directly and ask them a rhetorical question. It helps to involve them.
  • Divide your report into sections according to the input. One or two paragraphs will do.
  • Develop the ideas in the task input. Remember .
    • Use a personal or more neutral style, but not formal (you might use contractions).
    • It is important that you show a range of structures.
    • Give examples where appropriate to bring your article to life
    • Use humour where appropriate.
  • Give a conclusion and summary in the last paragraph.

Useful language for an article

Involving the reader
  • Just imagine...
  • Have you ever...?
  • How would you feel if ...?
  • Are you one of those people who ...?
  • If the answer is ..., you should....
  • What would live be like if...
  • ...
Making the article lively and interesting
  • I was absolutely terrified when I realised...
  • More importantly, it was something I...
  • Not surprisingly, it's a good way of raising money.
  • The tent was worryingly small for three people!
  • It was the most amazing experience I have ever had.
  • ...
Developing your points
  • Let's start with ...
  • Another advantage of ...
  • On top of that, ...
  • ...
Giving your own opinion
  • I think that / In my opinion ...
  • It seems to me that ...
  • If you ask me, ...
  • To my mind...
  • ...
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Article- Model question 1

TASK
You see this announcement on an English-language website.
Articles wanted
A charity event to remember
What is the most unusual way you've raised money for charity? How did you do it? What did you have to do? Was the event a success? Would you do it again?
Write us an article answering these questions.
We will publish the best articles on our website.
Write your article in 140-190 words in an appropriate style.
- See more at: http://www.rubenvalero.com/english/content/fce-article#sthash.nIt3hzy1.dpuf

Article - Model answer 1

A charity event to remember
So why did I decide to do a 90-km walk in six days along the Great Wall of China? Well, the reason was that our local children's hospital needed to raise money or it would be close. However, I didn't realise how big a challenge it would be.
Before I went, I thought that I would be walking along a flat surface but when I saw the Great Wall, my heart sank. Part of the time we would be trekking up hundreds of high steps and, worryingly, some of the paths had steep falls on either side and there was nowhere to go because we were surrounded by mountains and forests. However, after a while, I started to love the experience. I was in one of the most amazing places on earth and the views were incredible.
In the end, the adventure was a great success. The hospital was delighted because a group of us managed to raise several thousand pounds.
Would I be keen to help the hospital again next year? Yes, but I think I'll try and find an easier challenge next time!
[+/- 190 words]
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Friday, 22 April 2016

Essay content ideas and perfect introduction

In today’s society there is a really big problem with crime and what punishments to give criminals. Issues to be considered are the effort and time of the punishment, the lesson learnt from the punishment and the financial situation of the criminal. So which is more effective: community service or fines?


Community service advantages
Fines advantages
·        They do jobs that others don’t want to do
·        They help the community as a whole
·        Same punishment for everyone (it doesn’t matter if you are rich)
·        In the long term it is more effective
·        The person realizes the damage they have done and the importance of community.






·        The council can spend the money however they like
·        Much easier process for both the council and the criminal
·        The fine could hurt you financially if you were planning on buying something in particular

Monday, 18 April 2016

Essay writing question from class

Part 1
You must answer this question. Write your answer in 140- 190 words in an appropriate style on the separate answer sheet.
Your teacher has asked you to write your response to the following statement taken from a recent newspaper article:
Do you agree that community service works better than fines?
Notes

Write about:
1.   effort and time
2.   lesson learned
3.   ………………(your own idea)

Tuesday, 5 April 2016

New vocab and expressions from class

Week 16/03/2016

Forefather = ancestor
To work on something = To improve
Stunt = trick
To have a degree IN a subject
To call off = to cancel
To spend a long time DOING something
Rather than = instead of
To result IN something
To lead TO something
Without great expense
To remark = To comment
To participate IN an event
Apart from = except for

One of my forefathers had a degree in engineering. One day he had a meeting but he had to call it off due to him being ill and that resulted in him being fired.

My ancestors had a stunt to improve the popularity of their show.

I did such an amazing stunt the other day but I still need to work on it a bit. I spent a really long time doing it which led to me being an amazing stunt rider.

To be spoilt for choice = a lot of things to do

Wednesday, 16 March 2016

New vocab and expressions 02/03/2016

Week 02/03/16
To make a discovery
To run away
To find the courage to do something
To put something to good use
To BECOME extinct
To lead to something = to cause something
Well over ten years = much more than ten years
To be said to be something = People say he is something
e.g. Marta is said to be clever = people say Marta is clever
My daughter wishes she hadn’t spent all her savings on that car
This motorway is being extended by 100 km
The company shouldn’t have installed the new computer system
We mended the roof so (that) the birds would/could not make nests in it
I’m afraid I’m too busy to go shopping this morning
Matthew can’t rely on Alex helping him if something goes wrong
To rely on somebody DOING (gerund) something
There were hardly any seats left…
Pauline isn’t making any effort to…
Would you mind not making so much noise…
It isn’t worth cleaning the windows…
Worthy (adj)
“I’m worth it”
CHILDHOOD
VARIOUS
IMPORTANCE
GROWTH
THIRD
REQUIREMENT
UNLIKE
STRENGTH
ADDITIONALLY
ENERGETIC

Sentences with new language:
The discovery that I have made is said to be worth 5000 pounds.
It’s worth studying the exam so that you’ll past it. It’s worth it!!
The requirements to pass this exam are really rather impressive.

Make a mistake
Make a fortune
Have a party
Take no notice of something
Do your best
Have trouble
Do damage/harm
Take place
Take advantage of somebody
Have something in common
Make a noise
Make a difference

Take part in something

Thursday, 4 February 2016

Letter of application question

Task: Letter of Application
Question
You have seen the following job advertisement in your local youth centre.

ACTIVITY CO-ORDINATOR WANTED!
(Weekends only)
  • Would you like to work with young children aged 5-11?
  • Do you have lots of energy?
  • Are you an excellent swimmer?
If the answer to these questions is 'yes' then we want to hear from you. Our Children's Club is looking for someone to be in charge of a group of 10 children to teach them swimming and to do a range of other activities. Please send a letter to Mrs Sykes saying why you are suitable for the job.



Write your letter of application to Mrs Sykes. (around 140-190 words)