Friday, 22 April 2016

Essay content ideas and perfect introduction

In today’s society there is a really big problem with crime and what punishments to give criminals. Issues to be considered are the effort and time of the punishment, the lesson learnt from the punishment and the financial situation of the criminal. So which is more effective: community service or fines?


Community service advantages
Fines advantages
·        They do jobs that others don’t want to do
·        They help the community as a whole
·        Same punishment for everyone (it doesn’t matter if you are rich)
·        In the long term it is more effective
·        The person realizes the damage they have done and the importance of community.






·        The council can spend the money however they like
·        Much easier process for both the council and the criminal
·        The fine could hurt you financially if you were planning on buying something in particular

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